Hello everyone...
I am thinking if we edit Alexandra's story like...
starting with a man sitting on the desk, planning with the files ..and picture of a man on the wall whom he's going to kill...
and next day there is a big event and a man he is going to kill is giving speech...he shot him from the crowded people while the man is giving speech...and throwing something(a badge or handkerchief with a pic or name on it) to the floor after he shot that man..then showing that something and fade to black then go back to past....(maybe showing 15 years earlier)
a boy and father walking in the park...after walking a while, they sit on the bench and a man came to talk with father...during that time...a boy notices that something(a badge on man's cloth or handkerchief while that man wiping his face)..
and same like previous story, boy and father went back home..and father got killed....but boy got a killer's badge or handkerchief which's in his dead father's hand...boy...The end..
what do you think?
i think it's short..could be hard for 5mins?
I am thinking if we edit Alexandra's story like...
starting with a man sitting on the desk, planning with the files ..and picture of a man on the wall whom he's going to kill...
and next day there is a big event and a man he is going to kill is giving speech...he shot him from the crowded people while the man is giving speech...and throwing something(a badge or handkerchief with a pic or name on it) to the floor after he shot that man..then showing that something and fade to black then go back to past....(maybe showing 15 years earlier)
a boy and father walking in the park...after walking a while, they sit on the bench and a man came to talk with father...during that time...a boy notices that something(a badge on man's cloth or handkerchief while that man wiping his face)..
and same like previous story, boy and father went back home..and father got killed....but boy got a killer's badge or handkerchief which's in his dead father's hand...boy...The end..
what do you think?
i think it's short..could be hard for 5mins?
Ok, so you mean the story starts with the killer, or "assassin", planning the kill?
ReplyDeleteThen, in your version, we reverse the events? We see the murder occur, and through the handkerchief/badge/whatever symbol we are shown that the assassin and the killer from the past are the same person?
no..a man at the start wants to kill the person who killed his father....the assassin who killed his father is the one who's giving the speech...
ReplyDeleteAh, got you. That could work.
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